Thursday 21 November 2013

21st November 2013 (feedback from animatics)

Journal 

Feedback from our Animatics: 

I am really really happy with the overall feedback from Leanne and the rest of the class.
People commented on how our genre was well presented and how we have used the genre characteristics within our animatics, which is one of the main things.
People said how we used Goodwin's theory really well which is really important as this is the main conventions that need to be used within Music Videos, so I am glad that people have picked up on this.
They said that the overall pace of the animatics was very good too and that it goes well with the song, which is something we wanted to present within this.
There were comments on the animatics suiting the target audience and that it would be something that would want to be watched over again.

People commented on the things that we needed improving on which was the notion of looking and the intertextual references. However, we have shown this in our music video but you probably couldn't notice it in the story board images.

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