Feedback from Pitch

I am really pleased with the overall feedback that we have received. I am pleased that people think that the band name is appropriate and that there is an indie vibe presented. People have also commented on the well chosen record label and the plot of the music video which is also more positive feedback. We are also going to take on board the things that need developing. We are going to do some audience research which is something we needed to do. Also, people have said that the logo needs more work as it does not portray an indie feel, and as a group we also felt this too. We have already started looking at different types of typography to use which I have already put on my blog. Other things commented on were the bands image, which we did not mention in detail in the Pitch but as a group we have all put research into this so it's not a problem. Another was the filming of our music video, one about how to film on a train. We have discussed this and we have agreed that there will not be much filming but more or less amateur videoing to making it look more 'indie'. We didn't really go into much detail about the overall narrative of our music video but we are in process of completing the story boards and there is an element of a narrative. Overall, I am really happy with this feedback as most people thought our idea was good and there is some but not much that we need to work on!