Thursday 30 January 2014

Feedback from first draft of music video

We presented our music video and individual digipak and posters to the class and teachers so that we could get feedback. For my digipak all I need to do is turn around the images and move the spines into the right position, and there are no changes to my poster. 








Overall from the feedback I agree with all that we need to change. We used the singing from the chorus too much throughout the video that makes it look quite repetitive and it could get boring. We are going to keep the two original shots but we are going to film me singing more parts of it so that it does not get too repetitive. Also, we needed to have singing at the beginning section of the music video too as this is a convention that we need to adhere to, which we can easily film. There is a shot of holly that we are going to reshoot as they commented on the lip singing so we are going to change this. 

We needed to make sure that the colour scheme throughout the whole music video is continued throughout which I also agree with, as this can continue the indie/folk genre throughout. We are going to make some of the shots look a lot warmer by using the colour editor. The teachers said that the first half of the music video was not as fun as the 2nd half so we need to make sure that we spread this throughout the music video so that all of it is fun instead of one section. They really liked the 'selfie' shot as it's quite fun so we are going to take more of these and use them in the beginning section of the video to portray this 'fun' look. Adding to this, we need to make sure the overall pace of the music video matches the beat of the music too. We have discussed this as a group and we are going to make all the changes to the music video. 




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